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As you read through please consider the following:
- Is the intro effective? Do I assume the reader already knows a lot about the climate change debate?
- Is the metaphor in the intro effective? Should it be referenced in the body of the paper?
- Is it okay that I never address my audience of students specifically?
- Is my analysis too broad? Do I need to have less breadth and more depth?
Great job Chad! I loved the entirety of the intro. I didn't address my student readers directly either. I do think that you could have gone a bit more in depth in your analysis, but I think overall that this is a great start.
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