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Commas have to be used according to convention, not necessarily where you think there needs to be a pause. Thus is the case when combining clauses that are not independent clauses. Just because a pause sounds nice before the coordinating conjunction, a comma does not belong.
In addition, commas should not be used when the change the meaning of the sentence or take away the importance of a clause. Often modifiers are essential to the message of the sentence and cannot be hidden away with commas.
The Semicolon
A semicolon has three main places: replacing a coordinating conjunction, preceding a transitional expression, and indicating the relative weight of a pause if a comma is already in the sentence. In some cases, semicolons can be used to added emphasis to a pause when the distinction between clauses is great.
The Colon
A colon has standard conventions such as when writing time or indicating a ratio. It also sets apart lists, quotations, and summaries. However, all these must be preceded by independent clauses.
Reflection:
After reading my peers' drafts, I realized how much we take punctuation for granted. When I write my draft, I know the intention of the sentence and the right inflection and the correct understanding. However, this is easily lost when the punctuation is incorrect.
In Zayla's draft, she wrote, "In a successful effort to minimize the effectiveness of the sanctions and inform her audience of the misconceptions about the economy ; the author evokes sympathy and disapproval within her readers through the use of dreary tone, thought provoking narratives, and interviews from the citizens involved." The semicolon indicates a large break or pause in the sentence, which disrupts the flow and understanding.
In Jovanka's draft, she wrote, "Rhetorically it makes a lot of sense when you think about what kind of message he wanted to get across; he wanted his readers to come up with their own opinion and have their own thoughts." Although the sentence seems to read correctly, the use of a colon would help the reader understand that she is introducing an explanation.
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